From c4b8d063e6f4b0e50664f9402abc4760da6134e7 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Sophie Redford <sophie.redford@gmail.com>
Date: Mon, 24 Nov 2014 21:18:01 +0100
Subject: [PATCH] Wordsmithing index.html

Made some language alterations to the homepage.
---
 views/index.html | 10 +++++-----
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/views/index.html b/views/index.html
index b8b8c1f..d1e9e80 100644
--- a/views/index.html
+++ b/views/index.html
@@ -19,16 +19,16 @@
     <main class="jumbotron">
       <h1>These3Words Map</h1>
       <p class="lead">
-        Remember a location anywhere in the world with just three words.
+        Remember a 3x3 m2 location anywhere in the world with just four words.
       </p>
       <p class="text-warning">This is hot off the press. We are still
-      finalising the word list so locations might not be
-      reproducible. So do not use it to mark the location of your
+      finalising the word list, locations might not be
+      reproducible. So do not use it to mark your
       antarctic resupply drop quite yet!</p>
       <p>
 	<ul class="lead">
-	  <li>Type in a location to find out the three words by which to remember it (try <i>1600 Pennsylvania avenue ...</i>)</li>
-	  <li>To find the location referenced by a set of three words given to you, type them in separated by a dash (try <i>{{ sydney }}</i>)</li>
+	  <li>Type in an address to find out its four words (try <i>1600 Pennsylvania avenue ...</i>)</li>
+	  <li>To find the location referenced by a set of four words, type them in separated by a dash (try <i>{{ sydney }}</i>)</li>
 	  <li>Go straight to exploring the map by clicking the <i>Find on Map</i> button, it will take you to Sydney</li>
 	</ul>
       </p>